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IV. Vendorix, Southern Gaul, 
218 B.C.

i

Near the beginning of the month before September that the Romans called Sextilus—the bright half of the Celtic month about to commence—Vendorix sat alone in the four-pommel saddle on his small brown horse atop a long spiny ridge in the foothills of the Pyrenees. Many miles from his home, he watched the endless column of soldiers descend the pass from Spain into Gaul. He made no effort at concealment, content to expose himself at the ridge’s peak, for only the day before he had been in the soldiers’ camp in the pass, speaking with their leader. He had nothing to hide from Hannibal.

Well, that was not precisely true, for Hannibal knew nothing of what Vendorix planned to do when Hannibal passed by Vendorix’s own oppidum on his way to the Rhodanus River.

In the valley below, some eighty thousand men strung out in a column at least six miles long (if one could see it all in these foothills, which one could not), accompanied by countless horses, mules, wagons, and at least forty elephants.

These men had been on the march for over two months, from a place called New Carthage up the eastern coast of Spain. The dust obscured their numbers, but Vendorix had been among them and, though he knew to Hannibal’s men he had looked rather stupid, he knew very well how to estimate the size of an army—even one as large as this. Although from his ridge the column was over a mile away, the noise from so many men and animals, shields and armor rattling, mules bawling, men shouting, filled the valley with a great buzz.

Around him, thousands of butterflies swarmed, a bright profusion of fluttery color in some places nearly obscuring the granite shelf on which Vendorix sat his horse. It reminded him of the odd, rather portentous circumstances in which he’d met Hannibal.

Vendorix had approached Hannibal’s camp cautiously the day before, expecting to be intercepted. Thus he was not taken by surprise when Hannibal’s Numidian cavalry scouts found him and asked his purpose.

Once the perimeter scouts were satisfied that Vendorix was alone and he had explained to them his purpose, they escorted him to see their commander. His command tent occupied the center of a wide canyon, with a sizable space cleared around it before the army’s tents on the periphery. The camp itself extended out of this canyon in both directions, so that Vendorix could not tell its extent. But clearly it was large. This Hannibal had many men.

With his escort, Vendorix found himself suddenly walking through a camp fogged with a cloud of bright golden butterflies. Not far off, a small sea of gray humps rolled atop majestic bodies, flickering in and out of his vision as the storm of gorgeous insects swirled everywhere. The elephants stood like a field of animate boulders on legs as thick as trees—the first he had ever seen. Astonishing beasts, huge, thick, yet sinuously graceful in their movements. He wanted to stop and gawk at them.

One of Vendorix’s escort tugged at his sleeve. He turned his eyes forward again. A dark, square man with a blade of a nose had stepped out of the command tent.

The man was instantly wreathed in a brilliant corona of butterflies, yellow wings dancing like flames about his head, a stunning image. He smiled, a broad sweep of mouth that flickered into place like the insects, then melted away into neutrality.

Vendorix, taken by the image of a man in flames, found that his own mouth had fallen open. An omen surely, but of what? Vendorix could not fathom it. But he knew at least, in that moment, that here was a man favored of the gods, perhaps a very great man in the world.

The commander said something in a language Vendorix did not understand—Punic perhaps, since Vendorix knew he was of Carthage.

One of the escort replied in the same language. Vendorix decided it was time to announce himself.

“I am Vendorix, of the Volcae Arecomici,” he said.

“Well, Vendorix of the Volcae Arecomici,” the commander said, now in Vendorix’s own tongue, and passably well. “I am Hannibal. What brings you to us?”

“Romans.”

“Welcome, then,” Hannibal said, extending a hand, his smile returning, though his eyes were still unreadable.

Impressed with the man, almost as much because of his linguistic talents as because of the butterflies, Vendorix allowed himself to be taken into Hannibal’s companionable arm and led into the tent.

When they had settled to talk, a servant brought them wine. Good wine, though Vendorix preferred beer. They were alone. None of Hannibal’s lieutenants had accompanied them into the tent.

“Tell me of these Romans,” Hannibal said. “Where?”

“They’re in Massilia. A consul named Publius Cornelius Scipio, with two legions, there for a little over a month now.”

“And you know this how?”

“I went to see them for myself. It was not hard to learn the commander’s name, nor the number of troops—about 25,000, I believe, in fifty or sixty ships.”

“Any idea why they’ve stayed in Massilia for so long?”

“This Scipio’s men are in need of training, I believe,” Vendorix said. “I got close enough to watch them training—they looked green to me.”

“Interesting. So they’ve got some whiff of my coming, have they?”

“Only suspicions, according to what I was told in the city. They think you’re still in northern Spain, but they worry you may be coming here.”

“Good. Excellent,” Hannibal said, now beaming with obvious pleasure. “I’ve surprised them so far, then. But tell me, how did you know to come here?”

“There have been rumors across southern Gaul for months, General. I took the chance.”

“Now, then—why should I trust you?” Hannibal’s fierce eyes demanded a good answer.

“I am Vendorix, of the Volcae Arecomici.”

“So.” Hannibal sat back in his chair and studied Vendorix for a long moment. Vendorix waited patiently, not speaking.

“You must want something for yourself,” Hannibal said.

Now the crucial moment, as far as Vendorix was concerned.

“One thing only, General.” He wanted to phrase it just right.

“Yes?”

“I want your assurances that you will not fight the Romans anywhere near my oppidum.”

“Easy enough, my friend Vendorix. I have no intention of fighting any Romans in Gaul at all.”

“Then it’s true what the rumors are saying? You’re bound for Italy itself?”

“Let’s just say I want no part of the Romans in Gaul, shall we? Let the rest lie unquestioned for now. But you do have my assurances. I will do my best not to fight near your oppidum.” He pronounced the word correctly, seeming to know what it meant. This Hannibal was well prepared, the owner of good intelligence.

So they had talked further, about the location of Vendorix’s people, about what Vendorix would provide when Hannibal’s forces came through, about how Hannibal would respond to Gallic hospitality. Hannibal had sent him away with thanks and a nice purse of silver, a small extra benefit that Vendorix had not expected.

*  *  *

At a slight noise from behind him, Vendorix turned to look along the ridge, blanketed in gold. After a moment, a dozen riders suddenly appeared atop the ridge, coming from nowhere he’d been able to see. He recognized them immediately as some of Hannibal’s Numidians, superb cavalrymen from North Africa west of Carthage. The men rode without saddles or bridles, wearing short tunics, no armor, and carrying only a small, round shield and several javelins. Their black hair was curled in tight ringlets.

Vendorix saw their postures relax as they recognized the Gallic chieftain who had so recently visited their general’s camp. Vendorix recognized their leader, Valga, having met him as well.

“Well done,” Vendorix called. “I neither saw nor heard your approach.” Actually, he had heard.

 “Thank you,” Valga replied, speaking Vendorix’s own tongue remarkably well. “It’s a matter of pride.”

“As it should be.”

“Beautiful, are they not?” Valga swept an arm through the cloud of butterflies.

“Yes. I’d never seen anything like it before I met your general in a swarm of them yesterday.”

“And your purpose up on this ridge?” the Numidian asked politely.

“Oh, it’s just that I’ve never seen so many men all in one place before. My people are farmers and herdsmen, so we rarely see large crowds of people.”

“An impressive sight,” Valga said.

“Yes, I wanted to fix it in my mind before I go home, so I can tell my sons. My people will little believe it until they see it for themselves when you pass through our area.”

After a few more pleasantries, Vendorix said goodbye and began picking his way down the ridge, gradually moving ahead of the great serpent below, and gradually leaving behind the storm of gaily colored insects.

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